day tripper

Ahh so yes, I'm reading it(: And I LIKE ITTTT! :D

Wow, with just a little work this could be really good! Your sentences should be a little shorter, and a little more explanation could be good. I kind of got ...

Ahh that was so good! I loved how detailed it was, and how it was mysterious yet revealing all at the same time. Good Job!(:

Prolouge. Tarah ran as fast as her two legs could take her. Her mind was racing. Dodging swinging branches. Jumping broken twiggs. She just needed to keep going. There was ...

Thanks you guys! I hope we can talk again soon, I'm probably going to post one of my 8 unfinished stories chapters today. hahahahahahahaha. Okay. d:

I'm new to the site and I just read your story and it has me completely mesmorized. I'm excited to day dream about it, if that doesnt' sound strange what ...

I really liked it! I can't wait for part two(: My only comment is that, when you have the talking, maybe make a break inbetween them, as if starting a ...

Hey! My name's Olivia and I'm new to the forum. I LOVE to meet new people, and to let people see the work I create. I am currently apart of ...